Rin Tezuka

I like this picture a lot, and to be honest it is much better than some of your other drawings of the cast. I may be thinking this way due to liking Rin the best as a character.

I think it would be better if her uniform was a bit darker maybe, it just seems odd that most of the picture is completely white. Of course, this may be a good thing as it brings the viewer's attention to the face of Rin.

I think her breasts look odd in this picture, as if they are sitting on a table or something. The edges of her breasts should be more defined, it looks a bit like their edges are tucked under her arms.

It wouldn't be bad if her neck had some muscular detail, but the lack thereof does not take away from the picture.

Now that I've gone over the negatives, I'd like to reiterate that the picture is excellent overall. You captured her hair and her distant expression perfectly, and I was personally impressed how you drew her eyes.

The slight frown you've given her is a good example of a small thing that adds so much to the picture, and I think it completes the aforementioned distant expression. You captured the folds within her shirt finely.

Thank you for giving artwork to the Katawa Shoujo community. I know I appreciate it greatly, and I hope others do as well.